Tuesday, September 1, 2020

Kia ora. My name is Tasja and I go to St Patrick's school in Greymouth. Today I am going to show you another one of my weekend writings. My weekend was the best because I had my birthday sleepover. Anyways, here it is.


My amazing 10th birthday sleepover. 

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My weekend was AMAZING!! You can probably tell what I/we did by the title. I had my tenth birthday sleepover. On Saturday I still had to go to my sister Pyper’s netball game because the party wasn’t until 2 o’clock so I had to wait for around 7 hours which felt like 500. Later when the first person came which was Charlee oh and I forgot to tell you who came so here is a list.

Charlee.

Bella.

Addison.

Isla.

And one of my friends from another school Pippa.

So as I was saying when The first person came (Charlee) I screamed and I’m not exaggerating I physically screamed to the top of lungs because I was SO excited. Then after Charlee came everyone started coming and once everyone had got there, we did the presents. We had SO much fun, here are some of the other things we did.

Musical statues.

Musical chairs.

We went in the spa.

We watched a movie. The movie was called “Daddy daycare”

We ate A LOT!!

We played a game with cups and lollies.

We played bean boozled

I think that was everything.


So obviously I had SOOOOOOOO much fun like doesn’t everything I just told you sound fun?? Well I think it was fun and I think everyone else did.


The End


I think I did very well on mainly everything. Maybe next time I could try to remember things more instead of just making a list.


Hope you liked it Bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



 

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Tasja! It's Pyper here from St Patrick's School in Greymouth. I really like how you have writtin about your AMAZING weekend. I think that you have really discribed it well and put a lot of effort into it. It definitely WAS a VERY FUN weekend as I am your sister Pyper! Great job on your writing!

    Blog ya later!!!

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    1. Hi Pyper. Thank you for your feedback.

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  2. Kia Ora Tasja, I'm Indie from Grey Main school. I liked how you had put in a lot of things that you done for your birthdays like how you made a list of the games you played and how you made a list of who came, it was really cool. Maybe next time you could write a bit more instead of a list like a sentence or something like that but keep up the great work.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.